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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:54:00 PM
    This one swept me away. Take a bow Mike. Excellently crafted romantic piece.

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 8/29/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi M, Just like i said to Linda, i wrote this one for a native American friend. For once i didn't think about it i just let the words fall from the heart. Sometimes when you think about a piece like this too much you start second guessing yourself and i didn't want to do that. The idea was there and i needed nothing else. Catch you later. Your friend, MIKE.
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:26:00 AM
    wow! Michael, Indeed:-) How I wished to write a poem of beauty and meaning like this. The last line, gave the poem a beloved notion, of light and darkness by Her emotions. a lovely homage. LINDA

    clarke Avatar michael clarke
    Date: 8/28/2013 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda, Thank you once more for your comment. To be honest with you, i don't know how this poem came to be. I remember thinking of my native American friend, starting to type, and there it was. I let the heart speak, not the mind. You my friend are brilliant on a multitude of subjects and each has its meaning. You have a nice day now....Your friend...MIKE.