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oaks

Overhearing her shriek
At the trees, he 
Keeps gardening, whispering
Soothing sounds to the soil


for andrea's acrostic contest
8/27/13

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:39:00 PM
    Like the Ostrich with it's head in the sand. Says so much about humans. No judgement, just that we're all human. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 7:53:00 AM
    Your poems are great. Looking forward to reading more. warm thought, Ralph

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 6:41:00 AM
    wow.. it is indeed a soothing poem, Susan

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:00:00 AM
    congrats to you!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:59:00 PM
    awesome win..PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:32:00 PM
    Very interesting work..It has some drama iinvolved..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on this awesome win

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:03:00 PM
    B E Susan, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:59:00 PM
    Susan, congrats on your win with this wonderful acrostic! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:25:00 PM
    congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:51:00 PM
    AHA, so this is what you entered. I did not realize it was yours when you told me you did yours on a situation. I was thinking of a different one on the list. But this one did better!! I really like the last two lines. they are so awesome, but I was not sure what the first two lines meant. Let me know, will you? It makes me really curious. Congrats to you.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:18:00 AM
    - Well done B.E.S. ..... words that make sense ! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Nice acrostic deep and meaningful