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An Elegy for Syria

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An Elegy for Syria

After so many countries, now in Syria,
Increasing is the western bacteria,

The bacteria of hypocrisy and lies,
Which is in a dangerous disguise,

Under the banner of help and peace,
They seems like a white fleece,

They do things very secretly,
Pursuing interests very actively,

What they want is just conflicts?
In the entire world's districts,

They like when people kill each other,
Its how indirectly they do smother,

Try to understand that what is a war?
Because it opens up the profits door,

For the imperialists and dictators,
And of course their very own creators,

When imperialists start a war,
They make sure that its paid for,

So they pose to help by selling arms,
As if they are selling them charms,

In return of arms they make money,
So much that its not even funny,

On the other hand people also die,
In the region where they don't comply,

They want the entire world to obey,
Their orders and want them to say okay!

As long as one stays this way,
A nice attitude they will display,

But for instance if one says "NO" to them,
At first they get angry and hem,

And then come bans and sanctions,
Penalties all kinds of aggressions,

And still if they are not successful,
They wage a war to make stressful,

So that's what they did in Syria,
It was their anger and hysteria,

Because they couldn't do anything,
And through a war they wanted to sting,

But they forgot that who they are facing,
And what kind of a enemy they are racing?

They already are, their army, replacing,
And because of defeats they are reducing,

The Takfiri terrorists they brought in,
Are ruthless and not even human,

They are ripping chests of people,
And eating their hearts like animal,

So west and its cruel tactics,
Has nothing to do with the ethics,

So once and for all everyone,
Let's finish savagery which has begun.



All rights are reserved. Syed Imon Rizvi



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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Hi Syed, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 5:48:00 AM
    amazing poem dear friend

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 2:00:00 AM
    I'm Syrian, and i just want to say...congratulations! This is a beautiful poem and it reflects many unsaid truths. I also write about Syria...so if you want please check out some of my work. But again...amazing poem. Salam Aleikum! :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:56:00 PM
    I don't know how you happened to read my last poem. it looks like you are new to the Soup. Your poem is really good and to the point. it is all about power and money. You keep writing. you have come to the right place. You will find some wonderful people here. I wii be back, later.... Lucilla

    Rizvi Avatar Syed Imon Rizvi
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Everything happens for a reason, and it does not require any season. Thanks for your appreciation and encouragement. I truly appreciate that.
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:03:00 AM
    Hi, Syed , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *

    Rizvi Avatar Syed Imon Rizvi
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I truly thank you for your generous remarks!
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:25:00 PM
    Syed,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

    Rizvi Avatar Syed Imon Rizvi
    Date: 8/30/2013 5:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am glad that I found this awesome site and really thankful to you for your amazing comments.
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 1:45:00 PM
    a serious poem, welcome to p-soup

    Rizvi Avatar Syed Imon Rizvi
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a million!
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Syed ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

    Rizvi Avatar Syed Imon Rizvi
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot!