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Quicksand- In The Arms of Paranoia

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Quicksand- In The Arms of Paranoia

Vanquished and exhausted,
I wrap myself in the cold blankets of Humility
Further down the Spiral, in the Arms of Paranoia-
Looking at Life's sad Futility
Cascading, parading- the light of day is quickly fading
In Love's Quicksand, I begin to sink
But then I laugh unto myself-
Because I am drowning and cannot think

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  1. Date: 1/5/2014 5:27:00 PM
    Chan Chan This write gives the reader a sense of sadness and hopelessness that comes from inside you. It made me sad thinking you feel this way. I am sending you the biggest huggie ever. LOL Thanks for the very awesome and sweet comment on my Hidden Strength poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

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    Date: 1/6/2014 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again for being the first to review this piece, Robin. I always appreciate your reviews, Sweet Pea :)