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the writers soul

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the writers soul

               

                I did not mean to pierce your heart
               
                      What am I creating today ~
                 mixing colors together with words 
                      Sea blues~ shades of gray~ Vibrant Reds  
                    Amethyst Purple with Green
                       Black and white palate

                   to hurt another is not my intent ~
                    
                     do I stand in calm waters still
                          dangerous undercurrents 

                       exposed truth 
                                    piercing my heart ~
                           leaving yours  a open wound to heal
                                what gives in the writers Soul  ~ 
                           

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  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:48:00 PM
    Indeed dear poet, "What gives in the writers soul"? Open and haunting story penned here, beautiful and full of life, love, and colors for our eyes, hearts, and souls to partake in............. Love, Shar

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    Date: 9/17/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my beautiful poet and friend ~ Yvette
  1. Date: 9/2/2013 8:16:00 AM
    I was drawn by the title and you have not dissapointed me with your words. A fine piece. I also enjoyed reading the commenypts and your responses.

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    Date: 9/2/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is a beautiful compliment , your poems are wonderful , and I have learned from the Contest you have chosen for members !
  1. Date: 9/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Hi Yvette; I like your poem. A writers soul is sometimes very delicate and yet- who knows what a writer's soul feels. Sometimes, we don't mean to pierce a heart, but to touch it. I like the calm waters. Thanks for reading my poem. Things are starting to look better. .. Lucilla

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    Date: 9/1/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Lucilla ~ Very happy to hear things will turn for the better ! you have a beautiful voice and words written you gift all with ..it would be Sad if you said goodbye ! Thanks again , Yvette
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:30:00 AM
    A calm lake the writer's soul is that can be disturbed by the most miniscule object that may fall into! Wonderful poem, exaltation of sensitivity! thank you for visiting!

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    Date: 8/31/2013 11:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will be reading more of your poems and I am Honored you like mine ! Thank-you , yvette
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:31:00 PM
    I like the open and candid yet delicate way you have inspired trust . In my opinion a worthwhile poem will always pierce the heart at least a little because it comes from deep within the soul. Thank you for the inspiration here :) ****Please read your Soupmail*****

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    Date: 8/31/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Karen , you have a deep spirit and are aware of everything around you , I love that ! I read your soup , thank-you for writing me my new friend and poet ;) yvette
  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:14:00 PM
    The mind is a double edged sword, I have been in my fair share of trouble with my very outspoken words...A very nice write Yvette, thanks for the read...Peter

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    Date: 8/30/2013 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your poems are warm and beautiful , even if you write in pain . Thank-you my new poet friend ~
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Very nice creation here Yvette. I know you said you didn't mean to, but here you pierced my heart with your words... MC

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    Date: 8/29/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I would never want to do that !!
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Nice poem!

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    Date: 8/29/2013 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am very complimented you read my poem , Thank-you !
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Yvette, Your poem is beautifully written with a lovely flow to it as well. Love the choice of words used to express your poem. It flowed with such grace and ease as well. Again...a beautiful poem!!!

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    Date: 8/28/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karla ~ This site is so amazing , it has returned my voice and art that had been buried inside for a while !
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Nice Topic "The writers soul" colors mixed with words... I was expecting you to did deeper...but I like it nevertheless. Keep on writing

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    Date: 8/28/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ..the message is left for the reader to perceive ~
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Wow...I love the imagery here...Beautiful poem!!!

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    Date: 8/28/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Pace , this is a wonderful , creative site . Meeting so many artist and stunned by other poets like yourself!
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:38:00 PM
    that was a beautifully painted piece

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    Date: 8/27/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Liam , I love reading your work as well !
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
    - Beautiful flowers spreads no weeds .... Very well written my "new" friend Yvette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 8/27/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so sweet & yes ..you are my new friend ~ Thank-you ! Yvette
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Great Work Yvette !!

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    Date: 8/27/2013 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Chandras , you have a beautiful name . Yvette
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Ah, but we do intend to pierce another's heart with our words - but not for pain, or any kind of hurt but for sharing those poignant and raptured emotions that we can only truly relate with words such as these, a writer's soul!

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    Date: 8/26/2013 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , you are quite amazing , I am honored you are reading !
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:42:00 PM
    I don't know how you could hurt anyone with such a beautifully colored poem!!

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    Date: 8/26/2013 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you beautiful !