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Eris, Paris and the Golden Apple

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Eris, Paris and the Golden Apple

Too bright for sight,
This tunnel of light
A temple of Mind
In a life of Night
A ghost of Soul,
Too old to know
Life is Death is Life again,
(Oh, they told me so!)

*More experimental than anything

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:14:00 PM

    yes experimental.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/27/2013 6:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the reaffirmation.
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:44:00 PM

    I love the circle of life, and I loved your poem...Peter

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/26/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks, Peter :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Provocative maybe I would put the last line in parenthesis or maybe a dash before it...just a thought....mythological reference always intrigues me..V

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/26/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Excellent suggestion, Victoria! I will do just that! Thanks for the feedback; glad you liked it :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Yes, the winter brings the temporary death of the beautiful summer plants but come spring they rise again..Enjoyed reading your creative work...Thanks for the visits to my work..I appreciate you visits there..Sara

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/26/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for visiting my little poetic sanctuary in the corner of the universe also, Sara. I enjoyed reading your work as well :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 1:44:00 PM

    I can't seem to soupmail you. Feel free to mail me. :)