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Nude - from a woman's perspective

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Nude - from a woman's perspective


Nervously she begins to disrobe 
Understanding the desire in his eyes
Dropping her inhibitions along with her clothes
Eager and wiling to please her guy  



 Rebecca L ~ August 2013


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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:53:00 AM

    I love your direct style within this acrostic poem of yours, Becca. Love it! :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:34:00 AM

    Hi Becca, Very provocative acrostic..Nicely done. Ken

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Sexy poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 6:35:00 AM

    sensual and a perfect companion to your other piece. I think the one word keeps it as sensual 'Nervously' without it erotic.

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:17:00 AM

    aha, so you did it this way too. REally cool, Becca!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:12:00 PM

    I loved both versions! Hope you will take a look at Mouth and have a smile!!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 11:30:00 AM

    So we complete the circuit with this rather lovely piece. I think this is very true to form, women often worry about how they look to us guys, no matter how gorgeous they are. I think it's clear, for us guys who have a great appreciation for the female form, if we're with you, we're going to love what you reveal when the "silk hits the floor" -trust me! Great Job!!! MC

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Hmmm... you nailed it Becca... Terry

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:14:00 PM

    From one who appreciates the female form, this can't help but be erotic. From my perspective nothing could be lovlier. Add a lack of inhibition and we have a slice of heaven. God was on a roll when he designed the female form!

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 11:32:00 AM

    great write for the contest Becca,..best wishes

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/28/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I had already entered the other one when I wrote this... actually I think I might like this one a little better.. but oh well ;) thank you Joseph :)
    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 8/28/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    both are very good ...but I see you entered the other one...
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:01:00 AM

    Absolutely marvelous! Naturally Unique Delightful Experience!

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/28/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    haha I love your comment! :) thank you
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 1:55:00 PM

    wow I thought this was a sex free site. the word nude drew me in. Thank you for the erotic scenery. I'm 16 and got my mothers permission to be on line today. Isreal Curtis Cantu

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/28/2013 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Poetry Soup doesn't allow Sexually Explicit (X-Rated) Language. This poem is not even close to X-rated. However, there are some X-rated poems here, so don't click on anything which might be questionable.
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:33:00 PM

    Hey, Becca...Both your NUDE poems are a delight! Tastefully done! Andrea has so many words to choose from!!! This seems popular. Before I read the details I wrote one that wasn't on the list. Now I've got to go back to the choice of words and see what I can come up with. Thanks for your latest comments and posts. I see Richard is out to tease...He's incorrigible!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:21:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading this poem. This in no way is erotic. This is what being a poet is all about, making a bold and true statement

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:05:00 PM

    Again Becca a great Acrostic. ....Seren

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:59:00 PM

    Nice poem Becca viewing the female body from another perspective.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:33:00 PM

    I see this write as being just that, an appreciation of the female body, thank you for bringing out this art, such beautiful words and image! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a powerful piece, you are such a tremendous poet my friend, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:18:00 PM

    Oh its appreciated....that's for sure!!! :) love your work.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:16:00 PM

    this one softens up the first one. mines goes Never Underestemate Dee Equipment.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:38:00 PM

    Yeah, and how upset would you be if he just turned round and said, " I appreciated that", come on Becca, you can't say it's not erotic lol. Excellent write. Take care, Richard

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/26/2013 6:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL ok, you got me. ;)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:35:00 PM

    and that is how I take this one too. just great appreciation for the body!! (I am glad I am not looking at the one entered in my contest since I like to see them at the very end like a surprise!!)

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Great write, well done Becca...Peter

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:54:00 AM

    You have done a cracking job... love it xx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:26:00 AM

    This is excellent Becca! I love both perspectives, you are very versatile my dear!

    Macfarlane Avatar Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 8/26/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    soupmail!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Writing in a note of feel is better than writing it on plain sense. Well penned. :) A~D

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:01:00 AM

    I think "dropping" instead of "drops" might be more effective. But, that's not to say this was weak by any means. That said, this was damn good. "Eager and willing", indeed. Nicely done.

    L. Avatar Rebecca L. Date: 8/28/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:24:00 AM

    WOW What a way to start my day! You realize I'm a man don't ya, susceptible to this kind of wanton sexual behaviour! Love it (LOL) and you my dearest Becca! xoxoxoxoxox