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My trip

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My trip

Our trip

W e went up to Exmouth, it took us five days
I  nto hot furnace winds, the days were ablaze
N o relief was in sight for north we were bound
T here it is so rare that cool weather be found
E veryone goes there,  cause fish can be caught
R eports of good fishing make these places sought.

26 August 2013 @ 1203hrs.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:50:00 PM
    this weather is seemingly getting hotter and hotter here in texas, a good fishing place makes for a good trip, enjoyed our write, ~always, Linda

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/26/2013 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I came over to Arizona in 2006, and I used to think that Perth was hot. I was there for nine weeks and I don't think it went below 98 WOW!!! thanks for your comments Linda
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 3:20:00 PM
    So did this event take place in winter:? How interesting your lines are spelling out the word winter!!! It seems it was hot where you were!! Nicely rhymed, my friend.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/26/2013 3:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, thanks for you comments...the trip was in Our Australian summer, but it was winter in England where I was born Lol....Peter
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:24:00 AM
    - An interesting trip, thanks for letting me join Peter! - Have a nice day, my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/26/2013 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you for your comments Anne, always appreciated....Peter
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:20:00 AM
    It takes me back, lovely piece my dear.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/26/2013 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, my dear, it was some trip, and bloody hot as hell...Peter
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 12:14:00 AM
    Lovely acrostic with going to the lap of the nature, Peter

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 8/26/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much my friend...Peter