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Cloudy Days

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Cloudy Days

O ever changing sky, blue-gray and maudlin
your mood and unsettled ways, meld with mine.
The clouds seem but blemishes upon clear skin
O weary sky your cheeks seek only sun's shine
and gentle winds to sooth me in decline.

O let the clouds turn white and bright the day
let my bruised heart heal not be consumed
cirrus streaks and cumulus in joyous May
may your changing beauty raise me from my gloom
for clouds are naught but fair as new day blooms

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 11:46:00 PM

    and yes, the sapphic stanza is DANG hard. However, I can see myself growing accustomed to it if I would just start dong a lot more of them.

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 11:45:00 PM

    this is gorgeous and I see it won in the contest. Congratulations, Debs.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Debbie this is a good win... soup mail... PD

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 11:54:00 AM

    Great poetic quality in this fine work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 10:37:00 PM

    this is very nice!! Congrats!

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 10:10:00 AM

    I like the gradual shift in thought here. I always like a happy ending too. ~ Is the contest page okay now? I noticed that on my computer it has made a hash out of the formatting, but is at least readable. Rather aggravating.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:45:00 PM

    Debbie cool Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:58:00 AM

    You gave this cloudy sky a mood and a soul to match one's own..... excellent and with more emotion that all the others I have read here.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:23:00 AM

    A lovely picture you have portrayed. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:41:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Debbie

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your place on the winners list oh cool lady xx

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:29:00 PM

    good one... ~Love ~~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:22:00 PM

    Congrats Deb on your win in my contest. Glad you entered this very nice poem. BG