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frog

 
Walking yourself
 into the woods 
Trees on either side 
The scent of primroses 
upon the ground 
In the crisp cool air 
my summer breeze 

You sat yourself 
upon a golden fleece 
In the centre 
A rose for you 
Tossing my heart 
in the air 
I give you 
my everything 

Including my soul 
I fall into the pond 
My heart cries 
I became the frog 

Forever I remain here 
Waiting love to arrive 
I do not crave 
fancy diamonds 
Or fancy anything 
for that matter 
I just want love 

My fly in the ointment 
To heal my wounds 
Open the door 
my heaven 
I will give you everything 
Your heart desires 

Open the door love 
A beautiful fountain 
I bathe near 
Most beautiful 
in my eyes 
That I have ever seen 

Maybe fairytales 
a dream 
My heart bursts its desire 
In my kingdom 
This must surely 
be heaven 
To kiss the frog 
My fairytale

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 8:21:00 PM
    The problem isn't kissing the frog, it's finding him!....Which is something that I am still searching for!....Never stop searching for your "once upon a time" with a "happily ever after"!....Thank you for reading and kindly commenting on my poem, "My Despair". It means so much! And, I agree great minds do think alike.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you deeply for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:09:00 PM
    hey. what a cool poem i happened upon. Love this fresh take on frog of the fairy tales!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/30/2013 3:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 8:14:00 PM
    Hi Liam, Please tell me you don't want me to be wearing those damn tights again. I haven;t washed them since the last time partner. Well, you allready know i enjoyed this one. I've still got my duck suit just in case. The frog lives again, oh no! You wear the tights this time. I hope you had a good weekend Liam. Catch you later. Your friend, MIKE. Catch you on the flip side.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/25/2013 8:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    GREAT BALLS OF FIRE I AM POSTING THE DRAGON NEXT HA HA NICE TO SEE YOU OLD PAL