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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
    Nasreen is my cousin's name as im an indian frm lucknow India. Dis is a spectacular poem about some legendary enchantress. Which one did u mean actualy?

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:54:00 AM
    A very sensual poem. Nice metaphoric expression. Human or birds? you really made me think. Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 1:02:00 AM
    Nice write....you just got that edge..

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:03:00 PM
    An intriguing and alluring charmer... Much luck!! Hugs, Maggie Mae

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Hi, Nice write with melodic flow...Good luck! Ken

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:57:00 AM
    - Oh ... lovely .... love it .... exotic, in my eyes :) - Luck in contest, Giorgio ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:18:00 AM
    Expressive and passionate work that reads like a winner..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/31/2013 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have lain to rest "As Day Breaks" if you care to read what I have done with it..Sara
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:51:00 PM
    your words sensually dance across the page, along with the dancer....beautiful poem :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:22:00 PM
    Eloquent..intriguimg..sensual and beautiful..Giorgio..Outstanding

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 8/25/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    i meant intriguing with an 'n'..oops sorry : )
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Wow... I can picture this dancer so vividly enticing the audience... sheesh goosebumps !

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 1:04:00 AM
    Enthralling.....Middle Eastern Flavor...Nasrin....Persian word derived from? Turkish? Yes...Turkish flavor then...surprising for one coming from Greece! Very entertaining write.