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Beverly Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled 2013 which was written by poet Beverly Crespo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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2013

He tried to tame me-
             subdue me-
               break me.   

I pretended to let him.
I am unbreakable.
He broke.
He cried.
I cried for him.
I wanted him to win this time.
He is still weak.
I am sorry for that.
I am tired.
I needed a rock.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2013 11:41:00 PM
    Merry Christmas, Beverly -, I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:33:00 AM
    This one was really cool and I found it kind of humorous too. Hope you intended that!! I enjoyed finding this one.

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/9/2013 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now that you mention it, it was humorous in that the character(fictional, of course) who tried to "break" the other character(again, fictional) was hilarious. He thought that he really could. It would have been funny had it really happened, which of course, it didn't.
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:33:00 AM
    2013 has been a sucking year same as 2012. That is why I was drawn to this title!!

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/9/2013 4:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's sucking for me too, but I think that 2014 will be a banner year. I really do.
  1. Date: 9/16/2013 8:17:00 AM
    wow! Beverly, talk about you rough and not enough... I like the flow of this one. The pace hits each line, the way it should.. sorry about the down fall... and if you don't mind me asking what kind of Rock are you talking of :-)... amazing write it is!!! love it :-) Linda

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 10/9/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    One that you can build upon, solid and strong.
    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 9/16/2013 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A big hand for Poet Destroyer! Thanks Linda. Love your comment.