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Writing the Poem

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Writing the Poem

 Writing the Poem
by Ayesha Karim




I am alive.

I am breathing.

I thank God that I have the sweetest Life.

Blackberries surround me.

I talk on my new Blackberry mobile phone.

I call. I text friends and family.

I seek clarity.

I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.



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  1. Date: 6/21/2014 7:27:00 PM
    somber the mood when ur eyes open...its good u never forget though... good write

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 6/23/2014 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Wes.
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 11:06:00 PM
    This is good. A poem about life. God is great. He gave us life to enjoy it. Take care and God be with you always..... Lucilla

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 6/3/2014 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucilla.
  1. Date: 5/5/2014 9:38:00 PM
    so nice, about life, its simplicity, and can extend to vanity too! so amazing...

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 6/3/2014 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.
  1. Date: 2/14/2014 11:28:00 AM
    AK, I agree with Litan Dey, your last line, "I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight.", is simply "PROFOUND"! Good work!//Sinclair

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 3/30/2014 8:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Robert.
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:30:00 AM
    I discover clairvoyance that began as Insight...i like the line most.Good work

    Karim Avatar Ayesha Karim
    Date: 8/25/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Litan this line relates to how things have changed in my life since turning 30. I'm 32 now. I'm much more "myself" or self-aware than I was 5, 10, even 15 years ago. That line of my poem sums that all up. I have come a long way and I have my whole life ahead of me.