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  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:07:00 PM
    I love this Gail,,,,,nothing like a good ghost story. Is this true ? Since I was 9- I was watching scary movies, My older bro, told us a stories about a nurse & he put the shoes by our door. One day they were in a different spot. I thought he was going to poo his pants. He scarred himself ;} There's other stories I've been told ,,, but is this TRUE ;} going to fav's.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 10:23:00 AM
    - I lock windows and doors .... a ghostly day .... exciting and well written Gail! - A poem that would give Russell goosebumps ... I hope! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:49:00 AM
    wow, this is so creepy and imaginative, Gail. Love it and I know Russell will too

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Wild imagination penned in these lines..I am sure that Russell will like this one..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:58:00 PM
    Hi Gail, Wonderful fright night story depicted here..I liked this one.. Regards, Ken..

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:17:00 AM
    A great scary story Gail....I like the ending...winning wishes

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Oh wow! This is really dark and creepy.What a great and scary story! Bravo!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Oh wow !!! I can visualize a dark house, sitting with only candles, while someone reads this poem........ spooking even the most stalwart those claiming to be fearless of the dark !!! Loved it!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:47:00 PM
    Creepy descriptions portrayed all the way through in this Halloween narrative Gail. Well conceived my friend....hugs to you.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:58:00 PM
    That;'s a very creepy Halloween story,very well writen, I enjoyed reading it, nice rhyming, God bless you. Hugs!Erich