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Ugly

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Ugly


Underneath the exterior Gardenias bloom unannounced Lamenting that no one lifts the veil Yearning to be seen...

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  1. Date: 4/13/2014 4:30:00 PM

    Ms. Gorelick, I've read several of your creations now. This is a great one. Your poems using rhyme are nice and soothing. You have a soothing quality in your works. I think you have a strong grasp of language and the power of words. I prefer your free verse style. You have nice stories. Keep up the good work Regards, Earl

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:55:00 PM

    wow..awesome...PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this great poetic quality work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:09:00 PM

    Lovely write Barbara, congrats...Peter

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 2:00:00 PM

    Barbara, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:48:00 PM

    I love gardenias! What a tragedy if they can't be seen or smelt. Congrats on your win with this sad acrostic. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Congratulations Barbara...loved this

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 8:13:00 PM

    well done...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:44:00 PM

    This is really beautiful even though the word is ugly. I guess the poor dears will wilt into ugliness while staying undiscovered. Love this and congrats to you, Barbara.

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Beautifully written. Good job Barbara! ~Kilmer

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:07:00 PM

    Sharp imagery and concise verse evokes sympathy for the one who feels inferior :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:01:00 AM

    I love the theme you chose to get your point across.. Quite unique BG :)

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:08:00 PM

    i had to read twice and then relate the title. it was very thought provoking and beautiful. this is the one that woke up my emotions tonight. believe me i did read and fully understand this wonderful piece. so i will have to fav it. good work!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:18:00 PM

    It makes me rather sad for that hidden little bloom !! Well done !!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:48:00 PM

    Creative work that speaks of great truth..So true sometimes..Enjoyed reading your very unique work..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:21:00 PM

    TO MY FAVS! So beautiful! I'm enthralled! :)