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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:55:00 PM

    Very great diolouge I love it! and what metaphors you have in this piece of art. Great job! "Our thoughts are nothing more than air ballons!" Wow what a line!! Sometimes those air ballons pop! and thoughts are lost without a trace of returning! I love this poem, great write! Love from your fellow poet - Christopher xoxo :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:27:00 PM

    I haven't read Karens yet but very much enjoyed yours Rose. On my way to search for it.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Wow! Both poems are so impressive and uplifting.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 12:48:00 PM

    You are two peas in a pod, awesome examples for each other! This is a wonderful write that you two have collectively portrayed, such a tremendous poem! What a delightful piece, such a harmonious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:44:00 AM

    You two are examples for us....lovely writes....thank you.....

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:42:00 AM

    Lovely work Rose. Good job by the both of you...hugs.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Oh cool!! I just read that poem by Karen and then I made my way here and saw this! Awesome job with this, Mystic Rose! :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:33:00 AM

    Reads like a winner for the contest..Great work..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my poems..Sara

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:32:00 AM

    What a lovely poem. We should always inspire each other to good, and to write beautiful words like these.