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A Beautiful Love

A beautiful day, beautiful is time,
When I have you lay by my side.
A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme,
Just to look into your eyes,
And lie by your side.
Never felt so better in life before,
Nothing would feel better than hold you,
In my arms forevermore.
Time and time I felt,
To kneel over and hold your hands.
I don't know what is right and light.
But one thing is sure and very pretty sure,
I will love you all my life.
A~D

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  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:21:00 PM
    this is so beautiful and full of love and desire. the emotion and feelings can be felt from beginning to end. nice job

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 11/12/2013 3:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robin for the review. A~D :)
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 6:30:00 PM
    amazing it is Allen, congrats....SKAT

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 9/9/2013 9:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the review SKAT. :) A~D
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Allen, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always~ Linda

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 9/9/2013 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Linda.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Awww....so wonderful to be in love! A delightful and sweet read. Hugs

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/31/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cecilia for the support :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:05:00 AM
    Nice free verse Danie. Charming, indeed. G.

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/31/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you G for the review. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 2:23:00 AM
    A beautiful day, beautiful is time, When I have you lay by my side. A beautiful feel, a beautiful rhyme Great choices of words!!!!!! WOW Great poem love take time but i see you are Happy

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/28/2013 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ya I am happy. Thank you for the support Chris.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:11:00 AM
    LOVE 4 EVER

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/27/2013 3:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yaa thats true.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:05:00 AM
    NICE WORK MY FRIEND DO READ MINE AND TELL ME HW IT IS

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/27/2013 3:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you vinayak....will look into it :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:06:00 AM
    romance, romance, romance ;}

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/27/2013 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Who doesnt have one....have a great day.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Nice and romantic write! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem, "Cheers and Whistles".

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/26/2013 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Caroline. And your welcome. A~D :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 11:53:00 PM
    hello A~D, love is lovely and I love all the wonder games my heart plays when my heart beats to the perfect rhythm and rhyme when I'm laying with my soul mate. Your poem is a beaut, and lights up the word love..... hugs.... linda

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/26/2013 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Now thats one way of lighting me up to write....a poetic comment.. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:03:00 PM
    Another smashing write, hope you have more up your sleeve Allen, it would be a pity if you didn't xxx

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/25/2013 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose...sure there would be more :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 7:50:00 AM
    A very pretty poem, Allen. Enjoyed!

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/25/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harrell... :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 10:41:00 AM
    Ohhhh, Allen, you made me swoon with that last line; positively swoon. What a beautiful verse to end the piece. I adore this piece, and it's going into my faves :)

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/24/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks friend for the word of praise. Gives me the encouragement to write more. :) A~D
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:07:00 AM
    - Thank you for your beautiful poem! - Well written, poet friend! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/24/2013 11:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You to have a great weekend !! A~D
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:33:00 AM
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!

    Danie Avatar Allen Danie
    Date: 8/24/2013 11:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnx man !! :) A~D