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surreal nature haibu

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surreal nature haibu

the scent of rain and leaves
the trees colors vibrant
orange red yellow greens swirled in mist of gold
the pumpkins and corn the Earth has fed us harvested
to follow a unknown path with a chill in the air 
riding on a hayride by night bon fire light
sipping a spicy apple cider , a full October moons magical smile  
only with your first young love embraced and warmed 
as the air is touched with a cold cinnamon apples  breath 
stirs your senses and brings out the desire of a long held kiss



          "Autumns Breath "

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  1. Date: 9/14/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Yvette K, congrats!!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Scenery.... hugs *LINDA

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    Date: 9/14/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Linda ~ I have been inspired by the new contest , trying to get my book done , tougher then one realizes ! I love this site ~ Yvette
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 6:10:00 AM
    Yvette so lovely good write congrats Shadow x smile

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    Date: 9/13/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow , and the same to you ..I have been writing and editing a book , it will be out by Christmas .. I just noted if I took " THE " out of 1st two lines , it can be read interesting , the 1st word , starting at end , backswords .This site is helping me grow ! Much Love !! Yvette
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:30:00 AM
    A lovely winning poem Yvette ~SKAT~

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    Date: 9/12/2013 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my beautiful Poet friend ~ Yvette
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:50:00 PM
    Im jealous you are keeping all autumns there! one day Im gonna experience autumn and winter. . . . Congrats on your win. Morgan

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    Date: 9/11/2013 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh , I hope you do , you must live in a very Hot climate ? Hold a ice cube , and close your eyes , and imagine a forest of colorful leaves with a brisk scent in the air of Pumpkin, Love , Yvette
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Cinnamon Apple Kiss..Uniquely creative winning work..Enjoyed readding ..Congrats on your win..Sara

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    Date: 9/11/2013 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    editing never ends ... your win to !
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    Date: 9/11/2013 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you Sara , and your to ! Have a most deserving long held Fall ~
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Wonderful, I cant wait to doo all those thingsw. congrats. BG

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    Date: 9/11/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , I know you will , and may it be memorable, a cherished moment ~
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Beautiful...congratulations

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    Date: 9/11/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ! with love and warm , safe thoughts of you And all your family today , Love , yvette
  1. Date: 9/10/2013 12:23:00 PM
    - Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Yvette. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 9/10/2013 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you my beautiful friend from Norway ~ I love your poems , and if you did not reply to my win , I would not know I won !! I adore you ~ We must have coffee & chocolate someday ! Yvette
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:59:00 PM
    It is like being there! A vivid image that one may say nature pales in comparison! Great work! Thank you!

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    Date: 8/29/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ..I am sorry I did not see this earlier , I am wishing you this Fall , like written , but even better coming! love , Yvette
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:57:00 PM
    drawing words beautiful really lovely piece

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    Date: 8/25/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well now, my Irish Poet ! what a compliment , Thank-you .
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Wow, Yvette a vivd picture here you paint with your words. Look like someone can't wait for fall, and neither can I being in a dry parched land. Nice poem! MC

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    Date: 8/25/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you ! My Well spoken friend MC ~