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Another Lousy Lover

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Another Lousy Lover

I truly am disappointed
By such a lack of desire
When I think I should inspire
That swollen stuff of dreams
With a waving Wand anointed
By eager, willing hands
Spill free his demands
Then stuffed back in his jeans! 



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  1. Date: 12/9/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Chan Chan You bad bad boy. This is a "dirty" little poem hidden in a fun and crazy write. LOL You need to read my Poem Of Trickery And Fun. Good job Thanks for the honest and great comment on my An Angel Friend Hugs

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/9/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol I like to be dirty in an eloquent way ;)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 12:07:00 PM

    This mad me made smile. Very cheeky. =P

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/7/2013 10:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for stopping by, bud :)
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:50:00 AM

    Lousy lover - good titled poem... A~D :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/24/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Allen; I appreciate the appreciation ;)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:38:00 PM

    Hi A P., I would say the form is free verse, or a far away rhyme, anyways,,,, about your poem: I don't know much about lousy lovers... LOL, all the ones I had in the past were dummies... ;-) JK..... Very awesome. The ending made sense..... I like your style....LINDA

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/24/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again, Poet D. I don't write many "sexual" type poems, but when I do, I like to do so in sort of an indirect way; "read between the lines", I suppose. Thanks for the compliment and for stopping by :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:12:00 PM

    I like the way you tell it like it is. Crisp lines and great way to express an "unflattering" subject.. I pity this lousy lover ... very creative :)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/24/2013 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Karen! Like I said in an earlier reply to Poet D., it's not a subject matter that pops up very often in my work, but when it does, I like to be "cheeky" lol :)