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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:53:00 AM
    Amazing piece of work....looking for more :) A~D

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:56:00 AM
    this is simply smashing, G... you just float with imagery and finesse..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 11:42:00 AM
    I loved Loved LOVED the last line of the first stanza! And you have many captivating verses throughout. This is a fantastic rhyming piece; kudos and great job! :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
    This is beautiful and very well written. Thanks for sharing..... lUCILLA

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 3:04:00 PM
    I loved the flow in this poem..'We came in life one verse too late'-So besutiful and somehow melanchonic..'And you sppear with wrath in mind/thst distant smiles with lonely eyes-So touched by such words..and then the last stanza so beautiful..with a scent of hope.Ofcourse to my favs.Im in love with your nimbus moon..First time heard the moon described this way.Tnks for reading my humble.verses too- Charma B-)