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Mixed Emotions

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Mixed Emotions

 
“One Day” I had “A Moment” while “Dreaming” about you
“Sweet” memories came rushing in making me sad and blue

I have lost you way too young and now I am alone
“True Love” was ours to the end but suddenly you’re gone 

There will be “No More” “Fire” and “Love” for us again
Help me “Out of Darkness” and take away this pain

The “Sunset” will sometimes bring with it “Regret”  
The “Crimson Sky” will give “Love” but don’t fret

The “Red Sun” will  “Reach Inside Me” bring a new day
A day full of “Hope” and “Surprise” in every way

 “Good Times” will “Flow Slow” if you wish for romance
“Hear the Music” and create your own sweet slow dance

A “Sweet Treat” awaits for those who might
Try to steal “A Kiss” in the pale “Moonlight” 

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  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Congratulations... great job...you're on a roll....:-)

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:21:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:03:00 PM

    congrats on your win with this fine piece!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:50:00 PM

    Very nicely done. The theme is all romantic with your titles!! congrats.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:26:00 PM

    nice, and sweet... congratulations.. Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:43:00 PM

    So well written, congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Congratulations.... Such talent cries for recognition... Well done, sweetheart.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:06:00 AM

    This really very good, your titles all fit together and you've created another awesome poem from them... very nice. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Betty, love it... Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Great wordflow & a lot of expressed emotions here. Nicely done!!

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:33:00 AM

    I love this Betty! The words flow fluidly and build up a very well penned poem. Lovely expressions, well stated.