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REWOUND NIGHTMARE

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REWOUND NIGHTMARE

Toothpaste retracts
My finger replaces the sleep in my eye
I recycle the released yawn
And begin walking backwards
To sit upon my bed
Stretching, grunting
As I lay back down
I hear the birdsong
Make its way back to the beak
The sun re-route heading back east
The morning dew levitates 
From blades of grass sprinkling the clouds

As I safely return to peace, sleep
I turn and toss
Watching the nightmare in reverse
I'm falling upwards
Replacing the branches
I broke on the way down
With the cliff coming into view
I see people with terrified looks on their faces
Her scream races back into her mouth
Down her esaphogus 
Brewing in her diaphragm
I can hear the gentleman next to her
Talking backwards at the top of his lungs
Saying, God my oh

Reaching the cliff, I see they're running backwards
Frantic and scared
I see me waiting on witnesses before the jump
As I drive in reverse 
Cruising Turmoil Lane within my memory bank

I get back into the car
Return home safely in reverse
Unlock the door
My family greets and un-hug me
Un-pucker their lips...

The last time they saw me



Scribe ML

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 7:24:00 PM

    Congratulations, your poem was featured on the "Featured Poem of the Week" page. It was a magical experience to read it again :)

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 8:30:00 AM

    WOW!!! AMAZING...SO AWESOMELY ORIGINAL!! YOU FORGOT THE WATER TURNING COUNTER CLOCKWISE FLOWING OUT OF THE DRAIN....I'm Truly AMAZED to my FAVS

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/28/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet! I'll remember the water flowing counter clockwise, next time... Lmao, that's a good line, Frankz
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Such an intriguing piece. Loved the read. Love, Juli-Michelle

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/26/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:12:00 PM

    this is a real good write !

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/25/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lady!
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:43:00 AM

    Imaginative, creative, inspiring! Thank you for visiting!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/25/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mr. Trifiatis, your comment is inspirational for me!
  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:43:00 AM

    Doctor Linton Bradley, wot can I add to this comment that hasn't already been mentioned below!? Even these lines have already been highlighted in comments, but I am going to do it again: "The morning dew levitates / From blades of grass sprinkling the clouds". That is some brilliant imagery. I think this is one of your all-time best concept pieces written to date. This might seem a bit silly of me to ask you, but do you also think this is one of your strongest pieces to date?

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/25/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Chris! I think it's one of my best imaginative writes. True events are more compelling to me. How would you rate this against "Monopoly World"? Entirely two different conceptual writes, but both are imaginary!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:43:00 PM

    You're not lying fam....a burner it is!!!!! You did that bro.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks G. Ink-U-Script... I have to get some sleep, you see what it does to me!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/24/2013 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is toooo creative!!
    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT Date: 8/24/2013 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 12:35:00 PM

    very creative poem Scribe....well penned....best wishes

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:52:00 AM

    How absolutely creative???? Wow!!!! Fantastic write... I AM AMAZED!!! Thanks for your visit and kind words... Sometimes I wish life could be lived like you have described....The sweet dreams, I mean....

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:38:00 AM

    If only huh? What an amazing mind and poem....faving this too.....

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    If so, all endings would be happy ones. Thanks you so much!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 9:43:00 AM

    - Marlon, this is a masterpiece and wonderfully well written poem .... impressed (?) Woooow... ... YES!! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are too kind... Your comment is touching and exciting! Thanks Anne Lise!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:53:00 AM

    That is a poem in reverse..A very different twist..Enjoyed reading but sad about your ending..Johnny Rivers is singing "I've Got The Rocking Pneumonia And The Boggie Woggie Blues"..Sara

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara! I'm two-stepping to your comment.
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:10:00 AM

    so much in this and such a clever brilliant write love it will Fav Shadow x smile

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I'm touched by your words!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:23:00 AM

    Wow!!! I love this.. it's brilliant! Sometimes I wish I could rewind nightmares, even life. Wow, I'm in aw of this piece, it was so interesting to read. Going into my favorites. :) Have a wonderful weekend.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend!
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:00:00 AM

    AMAZING......................DUDE.........@$#%

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks poet!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Superb creativity in this one. So many fantastic lines and so lively ..."the morning dew levitates...they un-pucker their lips" The whole thing speaks like an episode of Outer Limits :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/24/2013 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Marlon....most amazing to me....the backward leaps of association! "from blades of grass sprinkling the clouds" WHAT A LINE!!!!! WOW!!! jimbo

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 7:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That's a huge compliment Jimbo, humbling my friend!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:34:00 PM

    WOW!!! An incredible write Scribe, it was like I was watching a movie in slow rewind, it was great! Interesting concept, we should all have a rewind button. Hugs

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I appreciate you also!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:42:00 AM

    This is stupendous, tremendous, and alarming, you have my full attention Scribe, my mind will carry the weight of your words, but my heart, will carry your memory, your every word, love, peace and puckered kisses, xxx Viexxx

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, you're too kind!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Holy damn, Marlon. Gripping build-up & a laced out painful ending. What a roller coaster.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol... Thanks Drake, just trying to get my swerve back!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:39:00 AM

    Well penned as always Scribe. Your take on the nightmare is very interesting and the changing scenes reflect well the bouncing of dreams - 'rewound nightmare' - now that is a word that deserves deeper thought. Well done.

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for encouraging words Vicky!
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:52:00 AM

    Marlon, I have no words for this one.. Just that I was there every step of the way.. You painted it so clearly that I had to go there. Like I was retracing your steps with you.. Really enjoyed this one. What inspired it? Ps: thank you for that comment today, coming from you it means a lot :) Hope you have a fabulous week!!

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Was asleep*
    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Wilma! Was curing my boredom while everyone as asleep inspird this.
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:50:00 AM

    Interesting for sure. Very well done, I can tell that a lot of work went into this one. Although....still not a love poem. :) love and hugs, Catie :)

    ML Avatar Scribe ML Date: 8/23/2013 7:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Catie... it's coming, the love poem. It may be the only one I ever do, so it has to be a good one. The ideas Ive written down for it is intense, maybe : )