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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:17:00 PM
    a very beautiful piece of writing

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:58:00 PM
    WOW!!! Mystic this is genius and so off the chain!!! Great write, from the start to finish you have kept me into the poem! I love it! "A pistol raining bully rules the sky," I mean come on that is a great first line! Awsome job Mystic, keep up the great writing! Love from your fellow poet - Christopher xoxo :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:28:00 AM
    Fantastic. I love storms. This poem made me think of a camping trip when storm clouds rolled in from two different directions and collided over our tent. I was laying under the awning watching.

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Rose you put on a great show with these words..awesome!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:24:00 PM
    I love a good thunderstorm as much as the next guy, and your poem pleases me just as much as a great storm! Of course I don't want a damaging storm, just a good rain with a little lightning, to a lot of lightning! A great show is what I look for! I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a delightful poem, Great work!!