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And I Am Lost

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And I Am Lost

“The perfect one” breezed in; it was “in May“. Like “petals in the wind,” “in dawn’s bright glow,” “a kiss of sunshine” on a rainy day, he brought the greatest “joy” I was to know. We watched “sun” “golden” “in a hammock sky,” “basking” until “after dusk” so “lost in love.” With “prairie whispers” round us, we would sigh. “My sweet one,” he was “what dreams are made of.” “September” came. His “soft touch,” still “divine,” “for just” a while endured! “Like fragile leaves,” it withered and “true love” could not be mine. So “taken hopelessly,” my heart still grieves. “A year of glitter glow” now seems a dream. “Snow falls” and “I am” lost “without hope’s gleam.” For Adam Hapworth's "It's All In the Titles" Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 2/2/2014 9:26:00 PM

    Andrea What a beautiful and creative write. You entranced me with the imagery and wonderful descriptive lines. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Long Lost Friends poem

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 4:15:00 PM

    It was wonderful, after perusing your pages, to come across these wonderful words. A lovely poem you hav pnnd here Andrea....Peter

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 10:38:00 PM

    This is an awesome piece Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:30:00 AM

    Awesome work, and a pleasure to read!

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 10:14:00 AM

    Wow!Great!!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:55:00 PM

    This is a beautiful poem...titles or not...congratulations Andrea...

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 6:49:00 PM

    You sewed your titles into an excellent poem here Petal, Congratulations once more. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Wow! Amazing poem, Andrea! Very beautiful imagery in this piece! I really enjoyed reading it....Congratulations, on your win, as well!....Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:30:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:08:00 PM

    Wow Andrea this is very beautiful, filled with such lovely images and to form a sonnet....well done....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Happy birthday Andrea... congrats on this one..Linda

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 3:02:00 PM

    A difficult form to do with titles yet you did a lovely job. Well thought out, congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:29:00 AM

    Amdrea. The many attributes you covered with this entry is amazing. You touched all the bases with this one. A rhyming sonnet made up of titles is a true accomplishment. I would gladly cede my placement to you.... Great work, sweetheart..... Jake

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 10:25:00 AM

    Wow Andrea....this is an amazing write. The beauty of your words astounds me! I agree with Becca, should have been higher on list. Big congrats! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:15:00 AM

    This one is breathtaking. No offense to the top winners, because all of the poems were so good, but I surely would have had several of the lower wins, including this one, up higher! lol I guess it's just a matter of opinion. Anyway congratulations on getting on the list :) hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:53:00 AM

    I am glad to see this one on the list....congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 8:27:00 AM

    You are never-ever..................lost !!! Always top notch !! I must have been too wordy in mine.........(I have that tendency.....just ask my hubby!! LOL!) Congrats to you Andrea!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Andrea, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 9:31:00 PM

    You have a true gift in writing. People will come and people will go, I think it is gods way of preparing us for the right one. I have learned many lessons in the few relationships I have been in and now I am just waiting for that right person to come into my life. I believe I am ready now. Thank you for sharing your most wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 11:28:00 AM

    An awesome write Andrea. I am lost for words to praise your work. It is always a treat to read your poems. A sure winner in the Contest. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:45:00 PM

    An eloquent expression of summer love. The future lye's within the soul. With hope for love to make us whole. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:11:00 PM

    beautiful as petals in the wind direction will shine a beautiful path

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Well done. Love the titles

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:33:00 AM

    just awesome, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:40:00 PM

    I like this sonnet. Beautiful words as ever, Andrea. You have the art of words. Well done.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:06:00 PM

    I read so many beautiful poems for this particular contest but Wow this is dreamy Andrea..Each title romantically chose..makes the resder sigh and want to read more.Happy Sundsysweetie

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Andrea; This is beautiful. I know that you will do good in the contest. Many blessings, always ..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:35:00 PM

    Amazing! I am a great admirer of collage. While I mostly dabble in the visual variety, the verbal version is quite interesting as well. You've done an excellent job here. Best of luck in the competition... Jack

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Wow Andrea! I don't know how anyone could come up with anything better! This was a delight to read and just enchanting!

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