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Let me go

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Let me go

              Let me go
 show me out the door with kind words
  I want you to Love me ..
  not punish by Force
 My Prison, my warden 

                 Let me go
          My choice to be Free
      Free of suppression,  of my own creativity
       let me decide for myself
               my destiny 

                Let me go
           let go of me gracefully
     I belong to myself , children and God
       Let me go , let go of me 
                 I am free 
            to choose to love and give
                 I am Free 
          from what burdens me 
                now I am Free
            

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Shanity This is so full of emotion and feeling. You pull at the heartstrings and touch the readers soul Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Eyeful Of Emotions.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 12:48:00 PM
    Be free Yvette, be free! This seemed to have come from the heart, I feel your emotion, thanks for allowing me to do so. MC

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/25/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are welcome .. Yet again , I think you have a beautiful soul , very creative and loving .
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I love "let me go" - I hope you found the freedom to be you !

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain
    Date: 8/23/2013 1:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your poems were amazing , the ones I was able to read! I want to dedicate one day to just reading all my favorite and new poets ! You are one , Thank-you ;) Yvette merci bou coup~