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My heart betrayed

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My heart betrayed

to me i saw you 
you are still there 
as beautiful 
to be in the presence 
of you. 

making all my stars fly 
a summers day 
to kiss you 
all my dreams 
even to the end 
my rose 
unless it gathers thorns 
like Cleopatra. 

i want to be your Mark Antony 
forever yours 
into words 
as my life passes us by 
never forget the love 
i have for you. 

a real dream 
made for a reason, 
it is so special 
i can never find 
the right words 
until now. 

you who suffocates 
my heart 
the circle of my life 
who has the very keys 
beautiful to me as a rose 
my eclipse. 

my very own heart 
in all 
that a woman 
should be.

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 6:30:00 PM
    liam, a nice winning poem..congrats~ SKAT

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU DEEPLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 2:59:00 PM
    Lovely piece of poetry! Very deserving of placing 5th in the "Any Poems" contest! Congratulations!...Now, I don't mean to brag, but I was placed first! I am so excited, because this is the first contest that I have ever won!....Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "Mystic Moon". It means a lot!

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OH WONDERFUL FOR YOU ONE TO PUT TOP SHELF THERE IS ANOTHER POETRY SECTION FAN STORY I SPEND MOST OF MY TIME ON IT YOU ADD PICTURES EDITING GETTING WORK RECONISED FOR PRINTING OR THE LIKES ITS EXCELLENT PLACE THOUGHT I WOULD MENTION
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:07:00 AM
    Liam, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always~ Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AH SO SWEET LINDA THANK YOU DEEPLY GREATLY APPRECIATED
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 2:51:00 PM
    How very very romantic..Your heart is full of love..Awesome

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 8/24/2013 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I GAVE THIS POEM WITH 10 RED ROSES A WEEKEND BREAK IT WAS THROW BACK TO ME THANK YOU FORE THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED