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  1. Date: 3/31/2014 12:41:00 PM
    Ms. Becca Loneliness is depicted as a sad spirit, unwelcomed, then sadly retreating to whence it came! 7 hugs, chuck

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 8:46:00 AM
    Becca Such a deep and intense write about the feeling of being lonely and thinking no one cares. You will never be lonely on here. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Christmas Tale poem.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Powerful opening. You've given fresh clarity (through your choice of images) to a subject I obsess over. The third and fourth lines are particularly beautiful. And thank you for your comments on my two poems. The feedback is very much appreciated!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 12:03:00 PM
    AN EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING WORD PAINTED BEAUTIFUL

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 10:51:00 AM
    Captivating words in this poem of yours, I love the imagery here. Quite a good poem you've written and given us Becca!!! MC

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:53:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 2:21:00 PM
    Just beautiful! I loved the imagery in this poem, and the flow of the words. You are a very talented poet, Becca! Nicely done!...I can also relate to the feeling of loneliness you described here. You might like my poem titled, "Alone"....Thank you for reading and commenting kindly on my poem. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Wow... a well-written poem. I love how you paint this vivid dark picture with your words

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 6:09:00 PM
    Wow Becca, I think this is the best poem I've ever read on this subject, made me feel lonely. Those last two lines are withering. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 3:17:00 PM
    Its as if you stood in one spot writing as you observed nature at its best. I feel as though loneliness is good for a period of time. If one is accustomed to not being lonely then they will always depend on another individual. Just a thought that came to mind after reading this. ..Beautiful poem. :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:07:00 PM
    You've displayed the visuals and words perfectly to describe the theme. You are a fabulous writer. I enjoy reading your work very much. Captivating

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 3:25:00 PM
    That is loniliness indeed..I could feel.it in my bones dear .Sad but the most besutiful

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:23:00 AM
    really good ! I am inspired by your writing .

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:19:00 PM
    As the others have shared here, you added heart to "Loneliness". Similar to the Tin Man who hadn't had a heart, but then did. To be lonely, is to be sensually empty. A want/need for more. Thought-provoking & very deep. Nicely done.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:47:00 AM
    Awe.......perfectly described.....

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Oh my, this just reached down inside and grabbed me, a masterful piece Becca.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Hi Becca, I should say this is wonderful piece. I can reach your deepest imagery that hitting your heart to make this awesome poem. I love it so much. Have a wonderful day---Elai

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:10:00 AM
    You have breathed loneliness into life with this write! The terror of loneliness is surely here within your poem, brought about by the trees you have written! You have amazed me by the power of this incredible poem Becca! I loved this piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:48:00 AM
    Loneliness personified. With your talented pen it moves from a feeling to a being. Fantastic poem. Thank you for your comment on my poetry.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 4:54:00 AM
    You gave loneliness a voice with this gem, even added some life into it. This is a beauty Becca, enjoyed it this afternoon. Hope you week has been great thus far ;) xx

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