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When Sorry Isn't Enough

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When Sorry Isn't Enough

Just stagger and swagger Myself onto a Dagger
Always makes me more the madder-
And my Mother none the sadder
Still I hear her softly crying,
All the while our Souls are sighing
In heavy breaths, so close to Death-
Upon the minutes dying...

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Chan The Man You are making me sad again with these death poems. You are becoming very dear to me and I can't picture days without you. Love and Hugs Thanks for the good luck wishes and sweet comment on my Two Hearts Pairing poem

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    Date: 11/22/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for being the first person to comment on this piece, Sweet Pea :) It's an old poem, but you know me: I'm a big sad sack lol. Love you, sweetie! <3