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Mercury

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Below is the poem entitled Mercury which was written by poet Aiden Asoll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Mercury

The great force
That may raise me to a saintly cloud.
I walk an air of calm delivery,
Above the torrent and hollow reproach
To the gaping breath and bliss, I say!
Send each thought into the winds, dipped in mercury.
For truly, there is none more beautiful than the open sky,
When it is seen through the view of the solitary eye.

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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 12:52:00 PM

    Gallant and euphoric ... I don't think I've used those words to describe poetry before...but they certainly apply to this lovely 'floating on air' poem :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:48:00 AM

    "I walk an air of calm delivery"- another awesome line that I wish I had penned myself. You said to me you wish you could match my ability to be brief and impactful; well, I believe you absolutely have the skill to do the same; you have demonstrated it here. I look forward to reading more of your work; please, post more! :)

    Asoll Avatar Aiden Asoll Date: 8/23/2013 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!! You give brilliant feedback really glad you like my poetry.
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:22:00 AM

    Wonderful piece of descriptive poetry.

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 6:47:00 PM

    nothing quite beautiful like nature and it's many visuals we seek and stumble upon, a lovely write, LUV S.K.A.T.

    Asoll Avatar Aiden Asoll Date: 8/22/2013 4:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey SKAT, cheers, this was something I once just wrote looking out the window in a science lesson, so its fairly old. Found it again the other day but thought i'd upload it, for me encapsulates everything I live for, so I'm glad other people can also find similar joy in nature, thankyou
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 5:39:00 PM

    Hello Aiden it was nice hearing from you... this one happens to be a nice rising of you. you kind of gave it an inadvisable feel... Always~ Linda

    Asoll Avatar Aiden Asoll Date: 8/22/2013 4:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey thanks, really glad you're enjoying my poetry, SKAT aswell, always feel a bit unsure about what I write till someone comments, so thankyou. Yeah, this one feels slightly different to others when I read it again the other day, not exactly sure why. It's short, but conveys a point very close to my heart, glad you like it.