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Losing

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Losing

Lost and embarrassed 
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…bring us cheers 
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears

Oh, the rest are ganging up on me
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…bring us cheers 
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears

Shot with shame – left without a name
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…bring us cheers 
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears

I hate myself in many, many ways
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…bring us cheers 
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears

Nothing is good about me
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…bring us cheers 
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears

Great…we’re losing, but we’re winning in God’s eyes
Losing…losing…losing…
Isn’t that exciting…discouragement draws near…
Losing…losing…losing…
No use of fighting back tears…have no fear
For God is here...have no fear...
Hope will appear...
In no time.

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  1. Date: 8/25/2013 11:40:00 AM
    Hope is with us David. You write some amazing things that bring me back to some of the awful things I've had to face. You have the makings of a winner.

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 9/28/2013 10:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hope be with you too. You're awesome, Duke, you really are. P-soup me!;) Didn't my write bring you back bad memories...? heehee....thanks. I try not to be a loser...'cause I'm not.... :DDD