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Shine

I am caught by his smile, in a rush of depth 
Fluttering hearts beat with magic and rhyme
I am to be yours now in the moment so spellbinding
Caressing lips and soft slow fingertips 

Locked in a link of our souls flavorfully dancing
Side by side rendering a cord of passionate secrets 
Shared by lovers shared by truthful elegance 
Spinning shiny spirals of fervent tapestry

We come together once again drenched and enthralled
No two times ever alike yet so familiarly flaunting
Concealed in a tomb of us, sensationally breathing desire
God’s gift between two people something so powerful and majestic 

Engrossed in an amorous fleet of pleasure
Seemingly dazed and mellow ,smoking with a gaze  

8/20/2013
Written by Laura L. McKenzie 
(Softly sensual contest)

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  1. Date: 4/13/2014 11:36:00 AM
    Your Poem leaves a tender shining on the minds with the fragrance of Love. Quite delicately sketched and painted Poem, on the physical beauty of love which ultimately ends with the ultimate mingling of two into one. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 4:01:00 PM
    What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 5:05:00 AM
    Laura, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Sensual and lovely poem

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 9:26:00 PM
    A lovely poem and I like the form it took on especially the bottom two lines, it cinched it for me, love xxx

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 1:47:00 PM
    I love the manner by which this piece just floats with its sensous gait, laura... i was wondering if you meant" majestic?" ( majesty)... a winner in my heart!..:) huggggs

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 12:03:00 AM
    smoking with a gaze. Oh YESSSS. Nicely done and sensuous.

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:27:00 PM
    so lovely and sensual Laura a fine pen Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 5:35:00 AM
    welcome Laura, your composition is romantic

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 4:19:00 PM
    soft and sensual..So beautiful this is sweet lady

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Beautiful write, enjoyed immensely...Peter

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/23/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Peter!
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Excellent. Lovely romance write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/23/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ravi !
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:39:00 AM
    True passionate relationship here. Nice.

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/23/2013 9:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment! Laura :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:47:00 PM
    very sensual piece...love the way it dances across the page... enjoyed reading this one...well done! Good luck in the contest! :)

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/23/2013 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sandra for your comment! Laura :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:33:00 PM
    yes, this fits the bill for soft and sensuous, dearie. well done! and welcome back to Soup, if I did not say it earlier.

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/23/2013 9:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea thanks! Laura :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:03:00 AM
    Intense & deeply mesmerizing. I like how there is this need & desire mixed w/this playfulness about it all. I really enjoyed this read!

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/20/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake you never stop commenting and helping people your a gem!
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 10:13:00 AM
    - Beautiful and sweet romance, Laura. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mckenzie Avatar Laura Mckenzie
    Date: 8/20/2013 12:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne -Lise your support means alot!