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Thoughts of You

There’s a relentless desire expressed from deep within my soul
Comes quietly slipping into my mind sometimes unexpectedly
An inspiration given to me which makes this broken heart whole
A recollection of some things you’ve said, some things you’ve taught me
May the love we’ve shared together never fade to a distant memory  

© Rebecca L ~ August 2013
*For Richard Lamoureux’ contest “Pick a Line” 

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  1. Date: 3/18/2014 9:47:00 AM

    Thanks for your thoughtful visit today Becca, it is appreciated. Hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 8:34:00 AM

    Becca What a heartfelt and loving piece. Memories of love can either get us through or tear us apart. I'm glad these are happy ones and not sad. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Flipped My World poem

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 12:34:00 PM

    Becca this is outstanding...but then again everything you write is....:-) ....congratulations my friend...

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 7:19:00 AM

    congrats on your win with this lovely poem Becca...hugs :)

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:40:00 PM

    Beautifully penned Becca, congratulations on your winning spot love xxx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 12:33:00 PM

    This is a quiet, and lovely look at love......I just love this twist on someone else's line! Well done, Becca.....congrats!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place Becca xx

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:51:00 AM

    Congrats on the win in the contest, Becca

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:38:00 AM

    beautiful write Becca...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 8:34:00 AM

    You captured the emotions so well, thanks for entering this romantic piece. Congratulations, hugs Rick.

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 7:26:00 AM

    Becca how beautiful love always wins through congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 6:00:00 AM

    You've pulled off a most romantic piece with impeccable elegance Becca. I like it my friend. I hope you don't mind me going through some of your work.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 1:12:00 PM

    You've done it again with this one. Words so soft and subtle they are as if weightless floating off the page...sigh.... simply wonderful... MC

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Gives a good feel.... :) A~D

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:56:00 PM

    Beautiful lines and elegant flow. A very touching aura about this one :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:25:00 AM

    beautiful read . really talented , Great poem.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:58:00 PM

    Thank you for the kind comment!! :) I see that you are very talented in your writing skills. :) After reading this, I had a warm heartfelt feeling running through me. I love how you managed to captivate me!!! Excellent piece madam!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:31:00 PM

    Excellent. Very touching and heartfelt write. Enjoyed your poem. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:17:00 AM

    You did this challenge so well, Becca. I sure hope I can follow in your footsteps! So who has those initials? WEll, thanks for giving me so many comments. Sorry I can't return the favor. I think I have read almost all your poems now up and it's SO LATE now. I am rushing off to bed now!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:50:00 PM

    You capture desire and love so beautifully in this amazing write Becca!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:50:00 PM

    nice. very heartfelt and passionate

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:04:00 PM

    What a powerful write this one is, my friend! I really enjoyed reading this romantic autumn inspired poem this evening! What a delectable piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:21:00 PM

    hi Becca this is exquisite great flow and most enjoyable read gl in contest Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:02:00 PM

    Nice read.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:39:00 PM

    nicely penned wishes

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:59:00 PM

    You are always romantic do you do it?....lovely....lovely.....

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Awesome piece. I did a Roundel for the contest too, it is titled LIFE LED BY THE THOUGHTS OF ANOTHER. The line I used is a Monoku titled SELF by SUSAN SUNSHINE BROWN.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:04:00 AM

    You defined the title of this writing quite elegantly. Honest & deep.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 10:43:00 AM

    Perfect write for the contest Becca!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:40:00 AM

    Lovely write...Becca! Romance does whisper strongly in your ear! :) Hugs