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  1. Date: 1/10/2014 12:21:00 PM
    I enjoyed this one even more the second read.

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 10:27:00 AM
    I had to re-visit; still enjoying this work of yours Charma!

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:16:00 AM
    This is unbelievably romantic and beautiful. Well expressed.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Charmaine Michael is very right; the picture you've just painted in my mind is very alive with color and life! That was most beautiful, thank you for sharing it with us.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Your word painting deeply describes your emotions in that time and place..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:25:00 AM
    'Scintilla star'. So neat. And I agree with the others-- you don't have to use oils to paint because you do it with words.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 9:15:00 AM
    Gorgeous Char! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:21:00 PM
    I am not a painter either - although I do like to doodle. My sister used to paint and I have had friends who painted. You "painted" a nice mood with your poem. Peace & love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:20:00 PM
    amazing beautiful pen stokes georgeous piece

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 11:41:00 AM
    This is like a painting itself with different hues of emotion. Your talent is as bright as a picture...always a fan...Caleb

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:15:00 AM
    Perfect picture painted if you asked me Charma.. This is a beauty :) I got to hear you on the archive on Drake's show. Made me smile, you sure surprised Drake ;) love Wilma xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Wow Charma, very beautiful poem, and very cheerful! Whoever you wrote this for is one lucky person, to have a woman, beautiful like you, painting and writing poetry for them! I wouldn't mind a woman like you in my life! Cheerful and beautiful poem, thats what I like Charma. Great job on this poem, keep up the great writing! I love it! XOXOXO from your fellow poet and great friend... Christopher :) P.S. This is going in my favorites!!! Great job!!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Well, you seem to paint pretty good with your pen. In order to do that you would have to be very gifted. Great poem

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Oh this beautiful Charmaine, if i could only paint, i would be able to write poetry like this...

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:00:00 AM
    this is just gorgeous, dear Charma. I LOVE it!!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Oh, and I want to say, this also reminds me of a North Jones song, why does the title escape me? But I am humming it in my head! 'If I were a painter...'

    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 8/21/2013 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What where you thinking that i would paint?fussilli and pasta fromage?: )Lol.You are a gteat friend who lifts my spirit high..hehe : ). North jones lines ..I wonder if it leads to Mrs Jones door goof : )..You gpt me chuckling..Believeme when i write using phone .Im much worse B-)
    nawala Avatar wala na nawala
    Date: 8/20/2013 8:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry, my phone has a mind of its own, I meant to say Norah, not North ;)....that would be Kim and Kanye's baby right? North West. Wow. I hope she never gets married to a guy whose last name is 'Airlines'!! Ok, that was corny of me...
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:22:00 PM
    You can paint, most definitely with your lovely words dear Charma! I really enjoyed your idea, for what you would paint.. Admit I was on a diff mindset when i read your title, but of course this is you and I think 'romantic' is in your soul and heart, so this is perfectly enchanting. So many lovely lines here, sweet! Thank you again for what you say about my voice, I am so flattered, shucks. You have such a lovely voice and tone, you reading your poem, just hearing you, made my hands all cold, that was from the thrill of hearing you, no joke!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Enchanting with a smile lovely words poet Beautiful poetry poet

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Amazing dear are an enchantress....Beautiful images....beautiful you...

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 11:17:00 AM
    - Sooo sweeet,Charma .... <3 it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)