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Dear Mother Part II

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Dear Mother Part II

dear Mother Part II I did not feel your hand anymore, when I talked to you in my special language. It happened one day in the Spring. How do I know? The perfume of the flowers penetrated your skin as you walked to that Hospital - Hospital that's what they called it. I will never understand. Isn't a Hospital a place where they take care of the sick and try to save lives? With force I grabbed myselfe to you. Couldn't you feel my hands grabbing your insides? I didn't want to leave you, I loved you so much. I wanted to cry out a thousand times, how much I loved you. I could feel your heart beating in a different way. Your blood was running through your veins more rapidly. I tried to kiss you and tell you goodbye, but I never had a chance. I felt I was choking. Little by little very brutally, they seperated me from you. I felt that nothing united us anymore. My eyes filled up with blood and I never saw your face. with a sigh that nobody understood - I left you forever. Now dear "Mother" I write to you from up here. I got here as fast as you rejected me, because GOD does not reject His children. I don't hold no grudges. I know that you loved me. It was that evil man that changed you. That criminal that took advantage of you and killed me. I don't write to recriminate you. I write to tell you, I love you. I hope that one day you will be able to see me and know me, than I will be able to tell you what I could not tell you then, because I was forced to keep silent. Something else: I spoke to GOD. He told me to tell you that He too loves you very much, that He waits for you with open arms. Now I have to say goodbye. lots of love and lots of kisses, your son...
08/19/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: I hope you have enjoyed this poem. Please say a little prayer, or light a candle for for all the little Angels that never made it here on Earth, but are somewher up above looking down on us.....

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  1. Date: 7/5/2014 3:13:00 AM
    Lucilla I didn't comment on the first one because I was waiting for the second one and wow how well you have written that, a few tears I shed because it was so sad, thank you for sharing this wonderful write Lucy, take care my dear friend............Vera...........

    Carrillo Avatar Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 7/5/2014 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vera; This was sad, but there are a lot of women that don't care to be mothers and they kill their babies as soon as they are born, or dump in the trash. I don't know if that happens where you live, but it happens a lot here.
  1. Date: 9/5/2013 5:59:00 PM
    A unique perspective on this very sad issue. You write these stories so beautifully Lucy, you are a treasure here in the soup. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 1:38:00 PM
    this was so GOOD. A fantastic way to write about abortion and I love how you used a forgiving attitude toward the "mother" of the poem. This is the perfect way to discuss this topic without coming off preachy!

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 7:58:00 AM
    Beautiful and sad Lucilla. A prayer will be said. G.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:37:00 AM
    this is written with such sincerity, and is so moving... love this and pt 1

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Excellent. Very touching and heartfelt write. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Lucy, you know the way I feel right now.. sending soup mail...LINDA

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Hola Lucilla, Lovely and heartfelt poesia....I enjoyed...Thanks for sharing.. Abrazos, Ken..

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:54:00 PM
    This is a heart wrenching piece. Fortunately God is in control of what we do not see. I often think he escorts their souls into the loving arms of another family. One day he will provide all the answers to our questions. Well done Lucilla!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:08:00 PM
    ... so sad Lucilla. - A child that was never born ..... an unwanted child. - Very well written, as your "stories" always are! - Wish you all the best! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)