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A Bit Fractured

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A Bit Fractured

 
Upon attending “Her Requiem”, I felt a bit fractured and nearly insane
When a fantasy of golden haze, wearing a shiny “Halo of Grace”
Suggested it would be wise to take a “Journey to Spirit Mountain”
And maybe chase some butterflies in a “Transformed” state

Off I went, “Riding My Whims” into a glaring "Red Sun" morning
To my chagrin, “The Goddess of War” struts in with utterly no warning
Singing,-Girl you’re looking quite undone, it’s clear you're having no fun 
Those fractures in the brain are going to require some “Change”-

The goddess continued her speech; but to her surprise I rolled my eyes while
She sang, -We’ve been invited to imbibe with “The Castaway and the Scribe”-
Well, the party was wild, folks drank all night, we all did the “Jive in a Beehive”
I downed the “Zin”, as the “Lust” crept in to my shapely “Scarlett” dress, 
At the end of night I was seen hitching a ride to “Burn” my “Nemesis”


"It's All In The Titles" Contest by Adam Hapworth  08/19/2013

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  1. Date: 5/9/2014 12:41:00 AM
    Hi Karen. Thank you for visiting my page, and for reading my stuff. Makes my day :) You write so well. Makes me wonder, why not more? Hugs...Mel

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 5/9/2014 8:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the encouraging comments ! I appreciate it. I really do need to focus more on writing ...thanks !
  1. Date: 12/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
    karen Such a creative and fun write. You pulled the reader into a world of craziness and humor Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Vampire poem

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 12/7/2013 9:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Robin, appreciate the comment. thank you :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2013 11:35:00 PM
    This poem was well written and enjoyable to read.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 11/20/2013 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for commenting :)
  1. Date: 11/13/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Agreed, this is very nicely weaved together. A full story from titles. very nice.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 11/13/2013 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Gina, appreciate your visit. Thanks :)
  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:59:00 AM
    Brilliantly done! too bad i came by a bit late for this contest anyway the flow was nicely weaved

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 9/3/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Danesh, thank you for commenting... have a lovely week :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:55:00 AM
    Karen, what a great entry. Nice flow to this one as well ;)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/31/2013 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Wilma... A wacky and fun ride to write :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 4:11:00 PM
    Very well done, Karen! Nice flow to your words here. Great imagery, too. Good luck in the contest! I have also entered this contest. Thank you once again for taking the time to read my work, and for the kind comments. I appreciate it!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/29/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kelly. thank you for commenting. I appreciate your positive feedback :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Excellent write, very cool flow:) <3. Cherie

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/27/2013 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    cheri, glad you enjoyed the silliness.. thank you for commenting :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2013 4:57:00 AM
    Wonderful! Well done. A bit of fantasy, a bit of mystery.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/27/2013 8:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Monterey... thank you very much :)
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 3:10:00 PM
    WOW!!! Good one, Karen! I recognized some of the titles! :) Good luck on contest, my dear!

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/24/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thsnk you for the great review:)
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 2:15:00 PM
    Splendid! A jamberee of the rough & nuts - a circus well worth making love to - the second stanza is so rich in dark mystery - love the droll personality - you're great Karen - I will FAV. file this - J.A.B. %

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/24/2013 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, I'm so splendidly surprised by your glowing review ...thank you
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Are these all titles of yours?...very cool. I guess it's for a contest....you have an interesting way with words that is all you...and you made this poem fun. I enjoyed it...:)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/23/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cale. Thank you, it was written for All in the Titles contest. I didn't think I would come up with something but decided to give it a try. This is the result. :)
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Quite entertaining. I loved it. People would be surprised to find how easy it is to write with the words already there. You nailed it.

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/23/2013 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    John, I was quite surprised how it came together. It was a very unique challenge . Thank you
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:03:00 PM
    very clever piece indeed

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/23/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    jack, thank you for reading, much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:33:00 PM
    Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/22/2013 8:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for enjoying my chaotic mind ha ha
  1. Date: 8/21/2013 7:08:00 AM
    how you put this all together mesmerizes, karen.. a really enchanting, engrossing write!..:) huggs

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/21/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    nette, thank you for the kind words... huggs to you :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:29:00 PM
    this is a fun one! to read and to know what the challenge was! great imagery ~

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/20/2013 7:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, I re-edited again just before you read it... glad you enjoyed my wacky write :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:21:00 PM
    such an enchanting piece you put together with your titles...well penned! Good luck in the contest :)

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/20/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sandra, thanks for the most generous comment
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Very creative write.... should do well in the contest..... I wrote one some time ago titled "My Best To You", but not for this contest. It was composed of Titles only of my poems.... It is an acrostic you might enjoy..... Jake

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/20/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jake, thank you for visiting and for the nice comments. I will go check out your poem... :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:38:00 AM
    WoW!! I absolutely adore and love this poem of yours !! Very powerful write !! :)) ..................Saanvi

    Anglesey Avatar Karen Anglesey
    Date: 8/20/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Saanvi, thank you very much :)
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