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Softly Sensual

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Softly Sensual

As I  stared down at the flower in wonder
I could see a pool of water at the bottom
I wished out loud that I was small enough
to be able to dive into its trumpet center

When to my surprise up popped a tiny elf 
that's possible he says to me, just drink this
I swallowed it down it  tasted of wild berries 
then, in a flash I shrank until I was elf size

Standing on the petal's rim I plunged on in
oh the flood of sensation set me tingling
it felt as if I was being caressed by many
hands everywhere as the water stroked me

The heavenly scented water carried me off
to a dream place where lovers dally together
slowly swimming, senses reeling on overload
I startled awake as a raucous bird flew above

Looking back into the flower, I glimpsed the elf
he gave me a cheeky grin and then he vanished 
was I just dreaming? Carried by wishful dreams
I choose to believe it happened just as I told you

written 08/20/2013 by Shadow Hamilton
contest Softly Sensual

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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 2:44:00 AM

    This is beautiful beyond words...I have it in my list of favs.. you must belong to the fairyland to be able to write like this!!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/25/2013 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Bindu Just my vivid imagination lol Ty you are always so kind and supportive I am honoured you added it to your Fav's Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/24/2013 7:05:00 AM

    Lovely work my friend.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/24/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    dearest M.M I Ty from the bottom of my heart love Shadow xox smiles
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 10:18:00 PM

    Your imagination is priceless and so is this sweet write! May all your wishes be granted. Hugs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Cecilia nice of you to take time to read Ty and also for your lovely comment Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:02:00 PM

    Hi Linda, Very creative write.. Ken

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:32:00 PM

    Full of imagination and very cute I liked this write nicely done.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:28:00 AM

    Superbly written

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Alozor and ty so much Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:21:00 PM

    Nicely done. You have a very active imagination. Great poem

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/20/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi PJ it is only our own limits of mind that hold us back set it free and the possibilities are endless ty for reading Shadow x smile