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HE COMES SECRETLY

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HE COMES SECRETLY



Beaded tresses and silk kimono rustle with finesse, Her geisha heels tapping restlessly on moist Yakasa weeds From an enchi...there he comes secretly, through groans of monks’ bells
*enchi---Japanese garden Walk Softly Contest: Debbie Guzzi by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:28:00 PM

    splendid Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 9:46:00 AM

    Awesome piece,Superb write......Congrats on your win,Nette...

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:34:00 AM

    super poem Nettie congrats on win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:04:00 PM

    Congratulations, Nette, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 7:47:00 PM

    just love this poem of yours...congrats on your win with this outstanding poem!

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 6:38:00 PM

    One wants to tiptoe through your poem! Congratulations, Nette!

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:54:00 PM

    I could feel the softness of the ground! How cool is that! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 5:36:00 AM

    Congrats on the win

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 4:55:00 AM

    nette..l9ve the win....pd

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:57:00 PM

    wowie, zowie, THIS is so awesome. So far I am loving Deb's lineup!! (glad I even got on the list with yours and Carrie's at the top being so great!) Congrats.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 7:28:00 PM

    Congratulations nette xx

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 5:04:00 PM

    Beautiful! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 2:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:01:00 PM

    I like this form, very lovely read....cherie

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 11:36:00 AM

    This is nice. I think that to walk softly - only geishas have the art to do that. Are the Geishas still around? love the poem thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest...... Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 7:41:00 AM

    Nice I think I am even inclined to check this form out. Good work.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:07:00 AM

    It is enchanting and exotique. It transfers the Japanese atmosphere to the reader. Lovely synthesis. :) G.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:56:00 PM

    This is very beautiful, Nette! (soup mail)

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:55:00 PM

    Nette, this is a beautiful Sijo Poem, well done and I want to thank you so much for selecting my poem Painted Horses Leaping in your Carousel In Roundel Contest for 2nd place, I am so honoured. Constance

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:54:00 PM

    Phillipines is very nearer to Japan:))This is a wonderful Sijo Nette.Love this.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Very well written Poem! I love it, waiting for your love in secret, awsome, a Japanese Romeo and Juliet I presume! Great poem! from your fellow poet.... Christopher :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Deborah is going to fall in love with this beauty..Im sure : )

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 PM

    wow,this is one of the best I've seen. One sure to please DEBS!! thanks for my place in your contest, Nette. I read all the winning poems. So many good ones you inspired.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:51:00 AM

    A secret told about passion in just a few enchanting words..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was fun writing that work for the contest...Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:08:00 AM

    This sounds like the beginning of a very intense story. Fantastic!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:57:00 AM

    Beautiful, Nette! Is this for Debbie's contest? I talked to some Korean friends at church and they said a Sijo was really difficult to write...Can I share yours with them? It is so.....soft, wispy and dreamy! Hugs!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:02:00 AM

    I can see her there through your words! I love poetry that comes to life! Great images, well written piece :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:47:00 AM

    Another masterpiece written by your feathered quill my friend! Your descriptions within this awesome poem is extraordinary Nette, I truly loved every word you have scrolled! I truly loved reading this magnificent piece here this morning! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:38:00 AM

    A Korean Sijo! and a good one. A little story in a few lines with a nice little surprise ending like a good Sijo should be. There was a little Sijo journal a long time ago that lasted only a few issues with the illness of the editor/publisher. I had a few in the journal, so I have appreciation for a well crafted Sijo, and I love yours. Liken to a chapter in a novel in a few lines told. Robert Henry Poulin