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Stagnant

Blue above and 

Blue below,
 
Clumps of clouds,

Falling slow.


Airplanes surge but do not move.

The elephant passes in the room.


I try to sleep, 

to turn away,

Turning pages

yet the story stays


Stagnant.


I look everywhere except at you.

I see nothing, except for you.






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  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 AM

    Hi Zin, Way to go! I love your writing style. The thoughts expressed bring out the emotions very well - stagnation is not a prided quality yet at times it comes in quantity. Well penned.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:03:00 AM

    - A lovely poem. - Have a great new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)