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Wishes

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Wishes

It doesn't matter if I'm asleep or awake
Dreaming is my constant state
Visions of my deepest wants
Of love and home forever taunt
The things I want but cannot have
For one reason or another I cannot grab
My deepest needs ever out of reach
What is this yearning supposed to teach
The only lesson I've learned so far
That it is useless to wish upon a star
My dreams and wishes forever grow
But wishing for a thing does not make it so

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 3:48:00 AM
    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING MAY YOUR WISHES FOREVER GROW

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:01:00 AM
    That last line is killer; loved it! I see a lot of you in me in your work; perhaps I have found another poetic kindred spirit. I would tighten up the rhythm, smooth out a few wrinkles here and there in flow and perhaps reword a line or two, but as I said to you before: these little things do not, in any way, detract from the beauty and sentiment expressed. You, my dear, have true talent, and I am enjoying reading your work :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:52:00 PM
    A BEAUTIFUL PIECE I ENJOYED

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 5:50:00 PM
    HI April, Nice write and kindest wishes for you.. Regards, Ken..

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:04:00 AM
    one can dream their life away, yet to write poetry as good as this, you have got your wish,,, thank you... lovely and enjoyable to read this....

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:41:00 PM
    April....dream and you shall see what will be! Nice! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:33:00 PM
    A beautiful write, from a fellow dreamer, thank you for sharing....Peter

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:38:00 AM
    !!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:41:00 PM
    this is so very true. I enjoyed seeing this one today, April.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:39:00 AM
    Got that one correct..Enjoyed reading your work..It has great rhythm, rhyme and flow to it..I enjoyed the topic presented..Thanks for the visit to my work..I am glad that you came..Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:10:00 AM
    I always say dreaming keeps us alive, without the hope of wishes and dreams where would we be? I enjoyed this piece, it made me reflect back at my own life and makes the reader look around them and ponder thoughts! Good write!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:18:00 AM
    - Really a beautiful poem,April !!!- Have a great new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 10:01:00 PM
    Beautiful, my dear....My heart responds in like manner...Thanks for the visit.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:41:00 PM
    This is good stuff from you that's rich with meaning and perfect rhythm.Excellent my friend!

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:12:00 PM
    Well-written and full of truth. Good poem