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back in my senior year, when i first fall to love..
we are far from each other, by  phone talks and messages...
past nine long months of pure sharing, couldn't believe...
i fall for a guy, i have never seen personally..
we exchange letters..
we talked two, three until wee hours on phone..
he let's me fall asleep without hanging the phone...
after about a year we met, can't deny i still remember how it was..
i blushed seeing him..
we hold hands and talked refreshing the months we never saw one another..
We continued for about two years...
however, things fall out break..
as he turned to Another girl...
he broke my heart as i set him free..
i wonder how much more will my heart breaks..
i don't even know if my heart still knows what love is...
deep down, i still believe...
but part of me is not trusting Anymore..
part of me is lost...
who will found me and be brave to take me out?
from that lost...
who will be?

---->> blessed my heart though it's brokeN thrice, still manages to beat; to care; to feel and to share... lastly, to believe in love....

"don't surrender cause you can win in this thing called love.... "

??true love, let's meet soon ok?, evening...

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  1. Date: 8/30/2014 5:26:00 PM
    Broken hearts can restart, and sometimes they'll never depart from the heart that's restarted ones heart - James........

  1. Date: 4/20/2014 1:18:00 PM
    Sorry that it had to end like this Olive_eloi. Life can be cruel and ungrateful. But I believe that all things happen according to a divine plan. // paul