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Senryu Soliloquy

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Below is the poem entitled Senryu Soliloquy which was written by poet Eileen Ghali. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Senryu Soliloquy

Must it be spelled out?
Everything in black and white
Where is mystery?

“Spiritual things
Are spiritually discerned”
Carnal? Enigmas….

If you then misjudge
Place the blame without a clue
Golden Rule applies

Eileen Manassian Ghali


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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:50:00 PM
    It's a mystery to me, left me without a clue but I suppose thats the point lol. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:43:00 AM
    I think I might try this form one day Eileen.Your work demonstrates your depth of talent.Have a great day friend.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 8/19/2013 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOW! This is very sweet coming from you, Mustapha! I thank you! I'm sure you would go great!!! You are so talented...but please stick to romance! You shine in that!
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:18:00 AM
    Hi Eileen, Very well done! I must say you’ve managed to intertwine the theme into the form superbly. It's like you are having a private conversation and we the readers have the pleasure to tune in to it - very nice.I sure hope to read more of your work. Vicky.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 8/19/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Is it all that? Why thank you, Vicky! I'm glad it reads that way!!! I usually write just what pops into my head. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Hugs!
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Personally I like a bit of mystery.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Good to know
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Many thought provoking lines here. You captured the "soliloquy" essence so very well.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 8/18/2013 2:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) I'm glad....Wasn't sure what title to use and then that just came up! Glad you felt that the content does live up to the title! Thanks, Drake!