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road trip

on the road trip I found
love sheds a light on all things 

I believe in love we must grow through pain 
Traveling through different States and Countries

In truth people all over , we want the same 
no mater how far , no matter how long you have travelled

There is a choice between light and dark
In meeting and accepting all people , embracing the differences 

in giving and taking , as "John Lennon " wrote
of course I will quote " The love you take is the Love you make "

be a poet , be  a visionary,  be a artist in design
on the road traveled , whatever road trip you find
always dance if given the chance , be true , be kind.

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 12:40:00 PM

    Yvette, very insightful, my friend Margaret said it best when she commented on your work as RAW and I agree, you have been though a lot in your young life to have these words come out. Best Always the Mortgage Man

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/23/2013 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you my number one fan ! I am a fan of your Mortgages too. Yvette
  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:47:00 AM

    Words of wisdom written from the heart....lovely! Hugs

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/23/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Very Much !
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:15:00 AM

    Hi Yvette, I must say - excellent write! I love how the words flow fluidly into each other making the read highly enjoyable. The way you’ve paralleled the road trip to the journey of life and love is very clever. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/19/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you Vicky . You have a beautiful way of complimenting ..you are very beautiful outside and inside .Yvette
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 12:36:00 PM

    nice work...!

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/19/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank -you Elai , I am honored you all read ! Yvette
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:12:00 AM

    Words of wisdom well penned.

    Rain Avatar Shanity Rain Date: 8/18/2013 10:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank-you beautiful inside and out ~