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Floodgates

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Floodgates

bitter is the wind this night 
which tosses up the ocean tide
see how it opens up the floodgates 


8/ 17/ 2013  7:15pm

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  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:05:00 PM
    So short, but yet so deep in few words. Enjoyable poem overall. Check out my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 1:18:00 AM
    excellent works as always xxxxx duncan

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, Most lovely crafted write... Regards, Ken

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Well written and very calming thank you for sharing. Thank you for your comments.

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 2:58:00 PM
    soupmail for ya.

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:44:00 PM
    This makes me wonder what you were thinking to write of the floodgates! A nice poem, Debbie. I would call it a small free verse poem!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:09:00 AM
    An ocean, a heart. Oh, the similarities. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Hi Debbie....I liked how you started with bitter...a powerful word....leaves the rest just following along nicely....

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
    Debbie, I think we haven't seen anything yet. Since oceans will rise and the planet will get warmer. This could also be a comment on crying. You are very observant and plugged into what's going on!

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:21:00 PM
    A great Haiku, very powerful words, thanks for sharing...Peter

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:36:00 AM
    This is visually powerful. Alot going on in this short poem. "opens up the floodgates" a very interesting line :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:56:00 PM
    A very good haiku Debbie, thank you for sharing... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 6:35:00 PM
    Not a bad poem well written and thought out thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:21:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this one today..I think that the tide might come in here and were are 3 hours away from the ocean..We have had rain, rain, rain this year..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:40:00 AM
    - Proficient, haiku Debbie! - Have a great new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:43:00 AM
    great Haiku here babe...

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 AM
    Very nicely done Debbie! Your vivid imagery opens up the mind's vision such that the image becomes clear. Well done.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:43:00 AM
    Lovely write, Debbie....full of meaning...Thanks fir comments on Scarlette Letters....hugs

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:43:00 PM
    † Always Seems To Be Something 'Bitter' Going On In This World ? No Matter How Hard We Wish, It Just Never Seems To Subside These, Darkened Tides, Sweet Beautiful Debbie ˜ One Day 'They' Most Surely Shall Although, Then, There Will Only Be Joy Love Peace Tranquillity ˜ Angels Ascending Descending This, Our Glory's Stairway To, 'Heaven' * Good To Read You Again And May These Profound Words Bring Forth Light ˜ Love, John