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Below is the poem entitled Forever which was written by poet Mustapha Mohammed. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Forever

My dear love,gaze within your heart
And feel the love thats growing
Where the divine petals start
And the trembling flowers glowing.

Where dovelike stars in towering light
Bears the seeds of beauty
Upon the breastplate of your heart
Love has done its duty.

Feel the stems, the hidden root
Of loves soaring height
Ride the wind,the happy wind
That takes us out to flight.

My dear love,tread no more in sadness
Your mourning heart so deep
Take my hands and fly with me
To the brinks of heavens peak!

 FOREVER

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:46:00 PM
    Hello M&M, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 7:47:00 AM
    the last stanza takes this poem to knew heights....well done.

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 11:06:00 AM
    VERY BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I REALLY ENJOYED

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:54:00 PM
    Great poem, once again! I love the rhyme scheme that you used, it flows nicely within these lines. Superb poetry!

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:48:00 AM
    LIKE A LIGHT WITH ITS ENERGY GLOWING BEAUTIFUL PIECE MY OLD PAL

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:24:00 PM
    a very beautiful poem, my friend. sixth line just say "bear" Luv, Andrea

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Hi M.M. Just reading one of yours I missed earlier...Well done buddy...Check my "Autumn Brown" write and let me know what you think.. Your poet friend, Ken..

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I did check it out I meant.
    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend. I will checked out the Autumn Brown. It is a fine piece.
  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:47:00 PM
    any time any where dearest friend lol. M.M again you excel this is gorgeous love it such a lovely flow love Shadow xox smile

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol thanks my friend. So nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 9:25:00 AM
    lovely poem mustapha. warm thoughs, Ralph

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ralph for your kind review on my poem.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:38:00 AM
    tugging at the heratstrings, mus...i Iike the lilt of the emotions that carry such a depth of feeling...wonderful piece!..:) huggs!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nette for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you. Hugs
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Ahhh!!! Passionate and romantic work that touches another's inner being..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..It was good to read the comment very uplifting..Sara

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/30/2013 4:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you.
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 2:27:00 AM
    This is a beautiful and romantic piece. Very moving,. For me forever ended to quickly.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richie,you're absolutely correct. It ended to quickly. In the future I will add the length of this piece.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:36:00 PM
    a very romantic poem!!!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Arthur for your kind review on my poem.
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Its 4am here, even at this unsightly hour your poem reads magnificently .....Seren

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/19/2013 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Seren for your kind review. How are you doing?