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Jagged Conversations

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Jagged Conversations

Jagged conversations incomplete lines
Importance of understanding null~void
Oh! Self-centered heart upon thyself dine
Jagged conversations incomplete lines
Scent of rancid fish cast in pickled brine
Only your stories, other stories avoid
Jagged conversations incomplete lines
Importance of understanding null~void  

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  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Sara - How did I manage to miss this stunning and powerful piece of work?... 'Jagged conversation' says it all and the 3rd line? Well, what can I say but that you nailed it! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 9:56:00 PM
    This is really nice. LOVE this line: "Oh! Self-centered heart upon thyself dine" Excellent work! :)

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Sara besides being an awesome poem I find an awesome message...thank you.....hope you and yours are safe and smiling...

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:34:00 PM
    You have written another tremendous Triolet, I really love it when you write these because you have improved on them a lot, you started off with a great Triolet and now have progressed into a phenomenal Triolet! I really have enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a magnificent poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 6:48:00 PM
    Awesome words/ lines up there Sara . very nicely done ;} you have an awesome day .