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Road Trip

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Below is the poem entitled Road Trip which was written by poet Shadow Hamilton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Road Trip

Rolling down the dusty unmade road
Over the rackety bridge we rode
A slow trickle of water under it flowed
Driving on even though the road narrowed

Tranquillity not at all overshadowed
Room to breath without feeling harrowed
Inner paths stretch leading to the highroad
Places now flash by, some of them hallowed

written 08/18/2013

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Solid monorhyme. Acrostic to crown it all. Check out the rhythm. Oh! Blessed poetry!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/23/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Alozor Ty for taking time to read my work appreciated Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Nice ROAD TRIP write Shadow...good luck in the contest...

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/23/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Donna gl to you also Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Beautiful road trip enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/18/2013 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Bl gl to you too Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/18/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Nicely written. Good luck. Rick

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/18/2013 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Rick and ty most inspiring comment Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 8/17/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Smooth transition of thoughts my friend.A lovely piece,good luck in the contest.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/18/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dearest M.M how are you? Ty dear for your kind comments Love Shadow xox smile