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4 men in a boat, on fateful night . A poet from England ,3 mates set sail , One fell over and met his demise , leaving behind 3 in sadness they returned .
To be described in a poem as they wrote .4 men in a boat ..minus one leaves 3.
I thought I alone , I was the only one. Maybe. I was wrong .
Who tells real truth in poetry I write , like the men in a boat that very sad night.
4 men in a boat , cold and frightened in a storm .
At the end of the Day , the end of life , all is happy , all is sad . In love and Pain inspired . Many words written, for life is a storm , in truth and misery . Until the beautiful waters calm , and the seagulls sing their happy song for you. Then you will be writing words of love and happiness .
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