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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:56:00 AM
    ...let true love awaken...

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Hi Becca congrats for being in the top 40 chosen by members.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Oh so beautiful Becca! Definately a fave for this. Applause!!! I've posted a new poem, I always look forward to your reviews.

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Whoa! I see what everyone else is buzzing about Becca this is some great writing here! "I was "Breathing You" in, while you were exhaling me" my favorite line -just amazing what you did here. Great poem! MC

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Such a sweet poem !! Love it !! And I do hope that these comments are filling your inbox !! xoxo~Saanvi :))

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 9:05:00 PM
    I would like to see the titles in quotes just to know how you used them in the piece. You could always re-edit after you win the contest :) It is a stunning poem.

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 5:46:00 AM
    You transmit your feelings / emotions so well making the reader becomes a part of the story.Very well penned sweet lady

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:00:00 PM
    You should enter this Becca, It's to good to leave out. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:56:00 AM
    Excellent write Becca....all your poem titles make for a touching masterpiece! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:22:00 AM
    wow, this is GREAT inspiration. you came up with a very cool poem, Becca.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 6:42:00 PM
    My favourite line is "I was breathing you in, while you were exhaling me". Could you tell me what "the veil" is a metaphor for please?

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Thanks for your encouraging visits and comments Becca. You always make my day.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:08:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Lovely. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 9:54:00 PM
    Ooh this is so so good! I was captivated from start to finish. 7777777 favorite!

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 4:34:00 PM
    I love the poem the last stanza was the best stanza I read today excellent poetry poet

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 11:19:00 AM
    ~Soup Mail~

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:51:00 AM
    ohhh, you take your titles and allow me to feel the mood in multi- faceted ways... truly a breath of breath of fresh air; just romantic, becca!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:19:00 AM
    This is a very beautiful poem you've penned my dear friend Becca. I enjoyed reading it this evening. You're a great poet as well. For me, this is a sure winner if you'll enter it in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by leaving a nice comment on one of my latest works. Have a blessed weekend! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 6:27:00 AM
    This flows nicely as a poem in its own right, yes enter it for sure, if you are uncomfortable later with the quotation marks you can edit them out. Tough to put separate thoughts to work as well as you have here.

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:06:00 AM
    Nicely done. I really like it. I'll give it a 7 as well. Btw, I've posted a new poem called Lewis And Clark