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So

So…time slows down
As I drown
In my misery pool
You make me
Look like a fool
Thoughts flood my mind
Almost making me blind
I’m spiraling mad in my misery pool
Am I your priceless tool?

I am so…
Scared of the dark
I am so…
Tired of living in fear
I am so…
Prepared to face another day
Out there…
Out there…
Without a care…
I am so…
Proud to see progress in my life

So…the day drags on
I feel the sun,
Melting away the anguish
My heart thumps with happiness
Thoughts zip through my mind
There’s traffic in my mind
I’m searching for love

I’m shaking and shivering
In my misery pool

I am so…
Scared of the dark
I am so…
Tired of living in fear
I am so…
Prepared to face another day
Out there…
Out there…
Without a care…
I am so…
Proud to see progress in my life

So…
So…I’m so speechless
So…time runs on..
Waiting for the precious dawn…
Now, 
The day is gone…
So…what?

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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:12:00 PM
    seems time does stand still or slow down when misery is around, but eventually it fades and brighter days come...like how this one worked towards brighter days and ended with a question...makes the reader think...nice poem :)