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  1. Date: 8/18/2013 3:14:00 AM

    This should do pretty well in the contest Rose.One word I have you my friend...''Exquisite!''

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 5:20:00 PM

    I like amusement parks as well! Nice work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Hi Rose, I finished my Title wave poem. Thanks for being the first to read and comment.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Good Morning Rose.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:03:00 AM

    Remarkable write. The clouds maketh so magnificently well.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Love the whole poem, but the last line is simply brilliant.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 10:11:00 PM

    This write is simply magnificent, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! I have to let you know that you might want to check the rules of this form again, the last line of the first stanza is supposed to be the first phrase in the first line, also the last line of the last stanza is supposed to be the same phrase. Sorry to tell you but I thought you'd like to know, I want you to do awesome in the contest...as this poem ir really tremendous! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:45:00 PM

    thanks, vie... SOUPY for you!..:) huggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 8/16/2013 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you don't have a soupy mail?..
  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:46:00 PM

    Good evening Rose.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 4:20:00 PM

    One great write, as far as I am concerned you have a winner there, thanks Rose....Peter

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 1:43:00 PM

    I feel my world spinning around, and it is in such a happy place. Thanks for the ride !! :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:27:00 AM

    love the carousel dream and laughter... thanks for the sweet look....Linda

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:09:00 AM

    I feel like I am there, well done!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:02:00 AM

    I'd LOVE to be in this poem right now. This sounds awesome. Give me some ice cream with this setting and I'm complete.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:29:00 AM

    reads like a winner to me Vienna gl in contest Shadow x smiles